Let’s Write an Article Reviewing an Event

Writing an event review involves explaining what took place and giving your evaluation of it: what was successful, what wasn’t, and why it was important. A strong review combines factual information, personal observations, and opinions, all organized in a clear and logical way.

Do the writing task:

Your school recently organised a ‘Charity Fun Day’. Local people were invited and a talent competition was held. Several student bands played and a variety of food was available. Write an article to review the event and 

• describe and give your opinion on the various events of the day,
• make some suggestions for next year’s event.

Nastia

An Absolutely Fantastic Charity Fun Day!

Have you ever been to a school event that was really fun and helpful at the same time? Our Charity Fun Day was exactly like that!

From the start, the atmosphere was really lively and exciting. There were happy people and quite loud music everywhere. It was a bit crowded, but that made it even more exciting.

The talent competition was one of the best parts. Some students were absolutely amazing, especially the singers and dancers. A few acts were a bit nervous, but they were still really enjoyable. The student bands were fantastic, and the music was very loud and energetic. Everyone was cheering and clapping.

The food was also incredibly good. There were burgers, cakes, and different international dishes. The smell was absolutely wonderful, and the desserts were really delicious.

In my opinion, the day was extremely successful. We had a lot of fun and raised money for charity, which is very important.

However, there are a few things to improve. There weren’t enough places to sit, which was a little uncomfortable. Also, the schedule was quite confusing, so some people missed performances.

Overall, it was a really enjoyable day. If you want to have a great time and help others, you should definitely come next year. You won’t be disappointed!

Vlad

Funny Day, Tasty Food and More

Recently, I went to an event organized by my school, and I would like to share my opinion about this occasion. It was a charity party, and there were some local bands. There was also a talent show where residents of our town took part. I was there with some of my friends, and I can say that we had a great time together.

We arrived a little early at our school to help with the organization. When the party started, there were more than three hundred people. The music we heard was excellent. I liked our school band the most, in which some of my classmates took part. People were dancing and having fun the whole time.

I must add that the food and drinks were brilliant, but I wish there had been more. There were special boxes where people could put their money for our army. At the end of the event, all the rubbish bins were full, and we helped to clean the area.

The things which should be changed for next year are the amount of food, because there wasn’t enough for everyone, and the number of rubbish bins.

It was a great festival, and I invite everyone to come next year and have fun with us.

Liliya

A Fantastic Charity Fun Day

Last Saturday, our school had a Charity Fun Day. Many local people came to visit us. It was a very busy day with music and a big talent competition. What an amazing experience!

The best part was the talent competition. Many student bands played music. They were brilliant, and the music was very loud and energetic. I thought the students might be nervous, but they were excellent. Everyone was happy and clapping their hands.

The food was also very good. There were many snacks, like pancakes and burgers. The smell was delicious. I ate some homemade cake, and it was absolutely divine.

But there was one small problem. There were not enough chairs, so it was impossible to sit down and eat. Also, by the end of the day, there was some litter on the ground. It was a bit disappointing.

Next year, I suggest adding more benches and more bins for rubbish. But overall, it was a fantastic day. You should come next year.

Event Review Article

A television production company recently spent a day filming part of a reality TV show called ‘Our School’s Got Talent’ at your school. Students showed artwork, put on plays and sang, danced and performed in front of the cameras. The production company organised food and a party at the end of the day to say thank you.They also said they would come back next year to film again. Write an event review article.

• Describe and give your opinion on the various events of the day.
• Make some suggestions for next year’s event.

Vlad

An Interesting Talent Show and an Amazing Party

Recently, a television production company spent a day filming part of a reality TV show called ‘Our School’s Got Talent’ at our school. We showed artworks, put on plays, and sang. Students from our school performed and showed their talents in front of the cameras. After the performance, they organized a party for us. I would like to share my opinion about that amazing day.

When we arrived at our school, there was a well-decorated stage, a lot of lights, and many people. I was there with my friends, and we weren’t performing on the stage. We were sitting in the first row, and I saw everything. The singing was brilliant, and I liked it the most. I must admit that it was the best talent show I’ve ever been to. The dancing was absolutely fabulous.

After the performance, a party was organized, which I also liked a lot. There was a huge amount of delicious food and drinks. People were dancing, and we all had fun. There were also competitions and quizzes where we could take part and win prizes. I won a pencil case and some other school supplies.

I would like to make some suggestions for next year. I think it would be better to have more quizzes, and there should be more food.

To sum up, I had a great time, and it was a lot of fun. I recommend that you take part in our talent show next year.