Writing an argumentative essay
Some people think that zoos are out-of-date and cruel institutions that should be closed down.
Do you agree?
Write an argumentative essay (for/against a statement)
At the moment zoos are very popular. Many people think that animals should be in zoos, although there are some arguments both for and against them.
One of the arguments for zoos is the fact they are educational because they provide visitors with lots of educational programmes. What is more, a zoo can be the only place where rare or disappearing animals could be saved.
As far as I am concerned, I am against zoos.
Firstly, it is cruel to keep animals in uncomfortable cages where they live under bad conditions.
Secondly, animals feel a lack of freedom and physical activity and they live under the lack of healthy food.
Thirdly, zoos break a natural animals lifestyle and change it upside-down. Animals which normally hunt for their food are fed, and most have to live in a climate very different from that of their natural habitat.
Moreover, animals suffer from foredoom and this can result in their aggressive behavior.
In conclusion, I’d like to say that zoos have no place in modern society, but I don’t mind safari parks because they are protecting animals, so they don’t become extinct.
I agree with your opinion but zoos can be useful, for example: the number of bisons was restored with the help of few remaining in zoos and and it is also interesting to watch the animals.
Thank you for the interesting fact, Diana!
good
I agree